Hmm. Seems like the overhauls need polishing. Not exactly over the moon with the latest round of feedback, but seeing that this latest version is essentially equivalent to my most-polished previous version is encouraging. I again received actionable commentary on what could be improved for the next go-around. And I think this is relatively “easy” to implement, the term easy obviously being used with several grains of salt.
But I may take some more commentary before returning to the lab, so to speak. In the meantime while I wait for that, I am challenging myself to complete National Novel Writing Month. 1,500 words a day, returning to a format I am not entirely familiar with, semi-seat-of-my-pants’ing a story I had ideas for maybe three weeks ago. Fun and challenging so far!